I feel like this went well for a draft. I haven't however used any costume and I should try next time hiding the identity of the character to create mystery and add more tension as the music reveals that there is something wrong already. The music works well with the piece overall. I could of experimented with visual effects to assign representations of the on screen character. The kitchen has to be more cluttered to again show that there is something strange about the situation. The baby monitor needs to actually be working and the final shots are far too dark. At the end I'm planning on adding a montage of close up moving objects and various actions over the titles. I'm happy with the idea that there are now credits in the very first scene as (in my opinion) this would ruin the tension.
